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1st place goes to :icongreatlizardx:'s story Flowers for Flower:  Flowers for Flower part I (fanfic Jacobthedragon)Flowers for Flower part 1
The sky was clear, a light breeze blew through the trees and it was a pleasantly warm day in summer. Flower and her son Time Watcher (Or Timer as he was nicknamed) were walking along together to head to Quartz’s place and pick up a few potions.
These potions however, were needed for one specific reason. Flower had always had a strong appetite which over time made her gain a lot of weight. But this got even worse after she became pregnant with her daughter Time Seeker. While pregnant, Flower ate considerably more than usual (and she already ate a lot to begin with), this made her get a lot fatter and eventually she got so big she couldn’t move on her own.
After Time Seeker was born, Flower was able to move around on her own again, but she was still very big and this caused issues when she tried navigating her massive frame through the doorways in her home and other small passages.
Flower’s husband Ken didn’t mind how big she was (in fact
Flowers for Flower part IIFlower’s for Flower part II
G’s ship, the Echo materialised in mid air above an endless and breath taking ocean of flowers and a midst this sea of colours were occasional islands of rock and stone that were completely bare of any plant life.
G sat at the helm of the Echo and with Timer sitting in the co-pilot seat next to him. Both Flower and Luminous sat in the rear passenger seats looking out of the side windows.
“We’re here!” G proclaimed and both Flower and Timer stared in awe at the view below.
“The flowers go on as far as the eye can see!” said Timer amazed.
“It is very beautiful” said Flower smiling.
“Yeah it is… but it gets old fast” said G with a bored expression on his face. “I mean sure, you can see thousands of different kinds of flowers in a single region of this world, but that’s all there is to this world, nothing but flowers”
“Well I still think it’s nice!” said L
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Flower and Luminous continued down the tunnel going even deeper underground. The tunnel spiralled downward for quite a while until they eventually entered into an enormous cavern.
High up on the ceiling of the cavern they saw even more of the light producing flowers and it made the ceiling of the cavern look like a star filled sky.
“Wow, pretty!” said Luminous as she and Flower looked up at the star like flowers above them.
But those lights were not enough to illuminate the cavern below as the ground was pitch black.
“apart from those glowing flowers, I can’t see much at all down here” said Luminous.
“I can help with that” said Flower as she took a deep breath and a ball of bright light flew from her mouth and into the air, where it remained suspended above. The ball of light that Flower created now lit up a good amount of the cavern, and what they found was a huge field of red flowers covering most of the cavern flo
Flowers for Flower epilogueFlower’s for Flower
Epilogue
After returning to the world of dragons, everyone had failed to realise something important. That if Flower’s body had been reverted back to before she was affected by the blood nightmare pollen, that also meant she had been set back to before she took the last sip of the pink potion.
Flower unfortunately returned to her full weight while still inside the ship and ended up stuck in the doorway when she tried to get out
“Okay, I’ll take one arm and Timer will take the other” said G as he and grabbed one of Flower’s arms.
“You know I went on this little adventure to avoid embarrassing situations like this!” Flower complained as the top half of her body stuck out of the door of the ship.
“It’s okay Mom, we’ll have you out shortly” Timer reassured her.
“Are you ready Luminous?” G shouted to Luminous who was still on the ship behind Flower, but the only reply he heard was gigglin
 
Reasons why he won: A lot of Effort into it, An very Interesting Story, Class, a really good climax, I really like this story, and for being the ONLY person who actually part take in my contest.

So :icongreatlizardx: wins 

I can understand a few of my close friends not being able to take part because they can be busy. (Update later)

I'm gonna make a journal entry later about how I feel about Contests and..... *sigh* there some reasons I wish to explain. 
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I'm pleased I won, but it sucks that I was the only one :( (Sad)